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Accept me as I am, with my imperfections
And see my weaknesses as my strength.

Drown me with your affection
that is deeper than the deepest sea

Excite me with your kindness
uncountable as the stars in the cosmos.

Thrill me with your overflowing patience
that keeps no record of my wrongdoings

Mesmerize me with your surprises
till my eyes shed tears of happiness.

Embrace me till I couldn’t breath
and bring me to paradise.

all of it –

Love me….

Till the Last Breath of your soul…




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  1. Shiju H Pallithazheth says

    Beautifully penned Luzviminda 👏👏

    1. Luzviminda Gabato Rivera says

      Thank you so much honorable Shiju H.Pallithazheth for that very inspiring comment,

  2. Timothy M DiVito says

    True words of love and inspiration from a wonderful and loving poet.

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